Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Friday, September 4, 2020
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Hello Jyrah. It's your buddy Jihu from WPS. Those facts are really interesting like I didn't know Canada is home to lots of bears! You probably could have written more facts and have put more detail. I also liked the photo you used for the background. Or If you can't put more facts, maybe make the font bigger? What do you mean by "But some bears eat"? Nice post though.
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Hello Jyrah.
ReplyDeleteThese are some amazing facts about bears.
I never new that a bear lives up to 30 years.
Know that is cool and interesting.
maybe you could put more facts about bears.
other then that i really like the facts about bears they are very interesting. Make sure to check out my blog
from savarnah
Kia Ora Jyrah
ReplyDeleteI loved your facts about bears they were intresting you did amazing work on it you must of worked really hard on this it was really great. I liked your 3rd facted the best because you said that polar bears live up to 30 years that is amazing to be living that long for them nice work hope you do more intresting facts about another animals. Next time you could write some more facts about something else but you did a really good job.
How did you come up with this?
Was it fun?
How long did it take?
From Tama
Kia Ora Jyrah,
ReplyDeleteThese facts are awesome And interesting.
My favorite fact is the one that bears that live up to 30 years.
The most interesting fact is the one about canada is homed to 60% of polar bears.
Maybe next time you could write more facts.
Whats was you favorite fact?
From Amani
Kia Ora Jyrah,
ReplyDeleteThese facts were quite interesting.
My favorite fact was the one that bears live up to 30 years.
Maybe next time you could add a description on why you have made this.
What was the ending of the sentence of the first fact?
Why did you make this?
What was your favorite fact?
From Isabella
Nice job Jyrah. I like how you put a bear in the background. You forgot a space in ¨up to¨. Maybe next time you could put more facts in. What´s your favorite kind of bear? Mines the pizzly bear. Keep up the good work, bye.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Daniel,
DeleteThanks for commenting, oops I think I made a couple of mistakes in this blog post because I was not really concentrating when I was making the blog post. Yea next time i´ll add some more facts. My favorite bear is the ¨normal¨ polar bear.
Have a good day!!