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Wednesday, June 16, 2021

World War 1 facts for the past two weeks we have been working on a world war 1 slideshow so here is some facts. 

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5 comments:

  1. TamaJune 17, 2021 at 9:19 AM

    Ciao Jyrah
    I loved your picture of the ww1 you did fantastic on it. You had some great facts about the world war nice job. Next time put why you did this so we know what you did it for. How long did this take?
    Was this fun?
    From Tama

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  2. JoshJune 21, 2021 at 10:37 AM

    Kia ora Jyrah,

    I think this is amazing because I actully diden't know that much about ww1 you have put great detail abrevaition and puchuation maybe next time you could edit the first sentence becuase it says world but you forgot the 1 were did you get this imformation, how dis you figure out that that majory of the fighting was in europe?
    Nice Job<
    From Josh<

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  3. JasonJune 21, 2021 at 10:38 AM

    Kia Ora Jyrah,
    I like how you added a camouflage background to go with the exact thing you are talking about. You taught me that France and Russian were two of the countrys that fought in the world war. Maybe next time you could try and put the facts into your own words. If you have already done so, then you could maybe add some more interesting facts. Which world war is this blogpost based on?

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  4. LaisaJune 24, 2021 at 9:26 AM

    Hello Jyrah,

    I like how you added picture to your fact sheet to make it more interesting, and i love it. You taught me so much about world war 1, like who fought in the war. Maybe next time you could change the colours on the word, so it would be more clear for the readers. But other than that good job!

    Kind regards
    -Laisa

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  5. AlexJune 29, 2021 at 11:00 AM

    Wtaj (hello in Polish).this is a great post because of all the great fact about world war 1 (or W.W 1, this reminds me of the time I was watching a movie of Lego people fighting in world war one. Maybe next time you could project it on a slide. I look forward to seing your next post.
    Bye 🤗🤗

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