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Tuesday, October 19, 2021

My Holidays

This is about what I did in the holidays, I hope you like it, we had to make a blog post about what we did in the holidays.

10 comments:

  1. hi jyrah,

    nice holiday i bet that was the funnest time ever hunting. you couldive added more information on what happened also m&ms and coke? dammmm that would be tasty. what fun did you do when you were in wanaka by the way.

    - Cory

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  2. Hey Jryah, this is a great post because of how creative it is, this reminds me of the biking trail I did during the weekends. Maybe next time you could make the words a bit easier to read. I look forward to seing your next post.
    BYE

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  3. Hi jyrah
    It looks like you had a good time hunting and it looks like you are better at shooting then your uncle hunting is fun and 22 are mostly just meant for rabbits know you made me want to go hunting.

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  4. hey Jyrah
    i really like your holiday.
    But maybe next you could put more.
    Because there is not much in there

    From lily rm 22

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  5. Kia Ora Jyrah
    I liked the way you said what the 22 is made for.
    Next time you could add a picture of people hunting.
    Maybe next time you could say how long the drive was to wanaka.
    I am going to wanaka in November to play harrys under 11 team and he will play for us.

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  6. Hey Jyrah,
    Your Holiday sounds like it was really fun.
    How often do you go hunting?
    I sometimes go rabbit shooting at my uncles farm last time i went i shot 3 and my cousin shot 2 and i got them with air rifle and then we cooked them.
    What is your favorite animal to hunt?
    I like the way you made it on a google drawing.
    From Amani.

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  7. Kia Ora Jyrah,
    Sounds like you had a mean holiday.
    I know some really dam good spots round Twizel for red stags and pigs.
    Did you shoot anything else apart from rabbits?
    What station were you at when you went hunting?
    Have a good one-Luca,

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  8. Kia Ora Jyrah,
    Sounds like you had a fun holiday.
    Maybe next time you could make it on a google side and add some pictures of you hunting.
    What was your favorite part of your holiday?
    Overall good job:)
    Ariana

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  9. Hello Jyrah,
    I really like this blog post and let me tell you why. I really like how you added such a big passage on what you did in the holidays instead of some bullet points. I also like how you said how many animals you shot 10 is a lot of rabbits. Maybe next time you could say why you made this blog post. Good job.

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  10. Hi Jyrah.
    I really like your post, it sounds
    like you had some fun. Is your cousins name
    Harry dixion, because he is my brothers friend
    from rugby.What did you do with the rabits?
    Good post.
    From Daniel.

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