this is my poem soughta about getting ready for school
Monday, August 10, 2020
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Hey Jyrah! It is Jihu from Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked how you put in metaphors and similes into your post. But I think you have got some errors like you put a speech mark after "rat". But I still really liked your post. I also spotted some mistakes, so in future can you proof read your post before posting?
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