Here is my work for reading today, we had to make a DLO on our follow up tasks, for reading we have been learning about structures and buildings. The other two blog post were about why I would go to Burj Khalifa rather than Malbork Castle, and some facts about Burj Khalifa. I am learning to read and respond to and summarize a text.
Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Monday, September 27, 2021
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia Ora Jyrah,
ReplyDeleteYour DLO is really informative and has some great facts such as your fact about the pool and hows its the size of two soccer fields!
Where is burg khalifa located?
Why did you choose burg khalifa?
Have a good one-Luca,
Kia Ora Jyrah
ReplyDeleteI liked your DLO you had some imfomation that I did'nt even know nice job. I loved how you told us how many nights that were guarding the castle. Next time you could add a bit more writing.
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Kia Ora Jyrah
ReplyDeleteI liked your DLO because you added some imfomation that I didnt even know and you also put in detailed words you also put in effort niuce work. I loved how you told us how much stories it is that must have alot of rooms in it hope you do morev like this. Next time you could add another picture so we can see the other side. Was it fun?
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