Here is my DLO on the Olympics, because were learning about the Olympics in school. So these are some facts.
Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Tuesday, August 3, 2021
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Kia Ora Jyrah
ReplyDeleteI liked how you were talking about the olympics it is fantastic you had some great detailed words in there nice job. I liked how you said Some olympic stadiums get abandened and some get graffted you are wright about that you did a great job hope you do more olympic. Next time you could add why you did it and what it was for.
From Tama
Kia ora Jyrah
ReplyDeleteI really like all the facts and the pitchers that you put with them all. Maybe next time you could have a read over what you writ because you do have some over lapping and some parts don't make to much scenes other then that good job.
hi Jyrah
ReplyDeletethe information is awesome its problem is that the facts arent that useful maybe next time when Olympics happens you could make the facts useful. question why is there like 4 Olympic rings on this blog? tell me.
next time you could add 1 Olympic ring pictures and some info about them.
-cory janssen