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Tuesday, August 3, 2021

Olympics DLO

 Here is my DLO on the Olympics, because were learning about the Olympics  in school. So these are some facts.

                      

3 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Jyrah
    I liked how you were talking about the olympics it is fantastic you had some great detailed words in there nice job. I liked how you said Some olympic stadiums get abandened and some get graffted you are wright about that you did a great job hope you do more olympic. Next time you could add why you did it and what it was for.
    From Tama

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  2. Kia ora Jyrah
    I really like all the facts and the pitchers that you put with them all. Maybe next time you could have a read over what you writ because you do have some over lapping and some parts don't make to much scenes other then that good job.

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  3. hi Jyrah
    the information is awesome its problem is that the facts arent that useful maybe next time when Olympics happens you could make the facts useful. question why is there like 4 Olympic rings on this blog? tell me.
    next time you could add 1 Olympic ring pictures and some info about them.

    -cory janssen

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