Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Friday, August 17, 2018
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23.8.18 Hi there, my name is mikayla I am a student at
ReplyDeleteohaeawai Primary School. I really like you Solar System 2.
Have you thought making a another one about the Solar System 3.
If you would like to view my learning, my blog is
htp://osmikaylablogpost
Hi there, my name is Sydney-rose and I am a student at Ohaeawai Primary School have you thought about changing it a little bit. I like your solar system
ReplyDeleteunicorns and everything magical
If you would like to view my learning, my blog is http://ossydney-roseh.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteHi Jyrah my name is Caleb I am from NBC. I really liked your blog about all the planets in space.I was really impressed about your facts about Venus Earth and all the other universes.Could you try to get some more facts about the universe. I have question Have you ever had a favourite planet and why would you want to go there?
Hi Jyrah, I’m Jihu from Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked the solar system blog and never knew the earth was protected by a magnetic field which stretches 60,000 km out in space.I think your slideshow about the solar system was pretty useful and was cool. I cannot really understand or make out the words sometimes, can you please check the spelling.Thanks so much for sharing your work and I hope you make more blogs… blog you later! This is the link to my blog:https://wpsjil.blogspot.com/
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